More Early Stuff

Current mood: creative
Category: Writing and Poetry

I used to exclsively write Petrarchan Sonnets. I started with Shakesperian Sonnets and "evolved" into Petrarchan. I came these recently.
Of course, I want to see how they go over now.
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If you could only ever watch one thing
What would it be?
Of all the beauty and the joy life brings
What would you see?

Imagine to always see any one anything
To be able to see the future like the past
Imagine looking at pictures that always last
To be able to see every note a singer sings

What would you notice while you're looking?
How deep would you'go to find what you seek
What keeps your attention? What makes you think?
How would you feel watching your favorite thing?

Do you know what my one thing to see would be
I'd love to see you looking back at me



#1

When you hide what you feel the words ain't real
Trying to see through lies like a forest of vines
Too much bull crap to smell the truthful lines
Wondering if I can believe you feel what I feel

Is it fear that keeps us from being so near
Scared to love me, don't you know I love you
Since before I met you, I've pictured us as two
If only you knew, for you are my tears

Can we ever find a way to be together
Someone always seems to be between you and me
Something has to be done if we are ever to be
Could it be now, or never - us - together - forever

If today is our last day, then of course you may
Say what you feel always so we both can say -


- I love you


FYI - I do have new stuff. I want to try something first though. Bear with me. It'll come soon. I want to have a story to go with the new poems. And I want to finish my book. I'm wayyyyy behind schedule