Optimism

Current mood: sleepy
Category: Writing and Poetry


I'm staring at the glass that used to be half empty
Pardon me, I mean used to be half full
But now its completely empty
Or should I say soon to be refilled
Or maybe even closed for renovations
Come check out our new completely full Glass!

I need a bigger glass











This reminds me of losing a lover, then realizing it's okay, and finally finding new happiness with the love of your life. I like the way it starts out singular, but then changes to plural.


You may be right. I just wrote the words as they came without much thought. This is a MySpace Original. It's not even in my word processor.


different...nice take on this


my cup runneth over simply because i read this...quite the the inspiration, you are!!! ...listen to me...sound like yoda....hehe.


As long as it is a glass full of Grey Goose.


See, it was half full when it was Grey Goose. Now, its water so it's half empty. Come February, it'll be half full again.


L.A. this is cute, but I can tell you were sleepy.


hmm....sounds like life

Let me try something

Current mood: accomplished
Category: Writing and Poetry


(Untitled)

I can never write a rhyme as great as you.
I can only recite lines and hope they're true.

(Let me try again)

I can never write a line as great as you.
I can only write rhymes and make them true.

(Oh wait)

I can never write a poem as great as you.
I only write rhymes I hope are true.
Is it such a crime to believe in you.

(No. OK This is it)

I can never write anything as great as you.
I can only rhyme lines I wish to come true.
I know it can't be wrong to believe in you.
How will I pass the time until I can see you.

I work, I rest, I play. repeat.
I work, I rest, I play.
Then the seconds become hours become days.
I keep waiting for tomorrow to become today.

What if I wasn't supposed to wait.
What if today is two days late.
Was I supposed to use more haste.
Instead of giving was I meant to take.

I don't think so. I'll just maintain my pace.
Well, at least I hope so. Hope I'm in the right place.
No wait. In fact I know so. It's part of having faith.
In addition to praying. I stay in God's grace.

So, I just keep on writing hoping that never ever comes.
And look foward to the day you stay; then my wait is finally done.







L.A. this was good, but you've done better and you know it, from the undecided beginning to the end. But still a sweet piece.


This is one of my previously unfinished pieces. Some of the recent poems I've put out were also previously unfinished. With this one I decided to include all the possible openings as part of the poem. So the effect is the appearance of indecision. Just trying something to give it a more real feel.


Nice!!!


I think it was sweet. I liked the appeal of indecision and vulnerability within the verses.

Missed Kiss

Current mood: creative
Category: Writing and Poetry


Missed Kiss

The more I think of you my miss
The more places I wish to kiss
Every so often a single tear drips
As I consider forbidden trips
Giving unrequited gifts
Kissing cold lips
As I reminisce
Untouchable hips
'Cuz even though you are my miss
You're married to another's lips
There's only enough warmth for one person's kiss
Too recently my chance I missed
For me. no kiss, no miss, no lips






how hopelessly romantic!!!


Feeling a little silly with this one, weren't you?


Silly? OK


Very sweet. You seem to really be in touch with your emotions lately.


Thank my muse


Awww, so sad. She missed out then.

Lines

Current mood: creative
Category: Writing and Poetry


Lines

Imagine than
I came to see a movie
But I run into you
It really does seem like the best dreams
Always come true

But you tell me
If this dream will last longer than my sleep
Should I just appreciate the chance to meet
A girl like everything I want a woman to be
Or is that too far down for me to see

Maybe we
Should wait and see
Whad'ya say we
Have lunch
Cuz I have a hunch
Soon we'll have dinner
And later wake up together and have brunch







taking it slow is key

Life Expectancy

Current mood: creative
Category: Writing and Poetry


Life Expectancy

I've seen my life
I've seen my wife
Tell me how I can go on living
Knowing how I am going to die

I know my life
I know my wife
Tell me what's the fun of living
Knowing nothing is ever a surprise

I met my wife
I've lived our life
Tell me why it's worth living
Knowing it's already happened in my mind

I know there's a heaven
I've already seen hell
I met the devil
Lord knows I mean well

I've heard so much
Have I heard it all
Can you learn too much
Can you ever know it all

I know there is more to this
I know I can get it done
I know I have things to finish
I know just living is all the fun







I'm not really feeling this one. It seems so negative. Almost like, why keep living if you've already seen it all?

Scent of a Woman

Current mood: creative
Category: Writing and Poetry


Scent of a Woman

Red meat!
S'been a while since I gave that up
But every once in a while I do chew some fat
When I get to cravin
My nose starts to twitch
I start misbehaving
Raving for that scent I miss
The most un-lady-like thing that comes from a lady
Is the most precious thing anyone's ever gave me
The scent of a woman
The essence of the female human
Is the rarest of treats
Its my delicacy
To be savored for hours
A taste that never sours
Oh how I long to eat
The meat I cannot keep
Only taste and nibble a bit
Till my chin glistens from it
Till I can't tell sweat from spit from it
Oh how I long to treasure this gift
Sweet delicious nutritious nurishment
For my mind's, body's and spirit's uplift
This must be heaven sent
Is it for me that this was meant
Must be, the way I revel in it

So can I
Please
You
Me
Touch
Lick
Tease
Suck
Inhale
Rub
Lick some more
And more
Til we're both sore
And we're just getting started
And don't you get me started
After we end
This beginning

Just do me one favor
Prepare to be savored
Relished
Embellished
And played with
I just want to
Touch it
Taste it
Tease it
Please it
So please
Let me

Eat






It's like 2 poems in 1... Quite an apetizer, I might add. What a difference from your "First Time". This is totally tempting with tantalizing teases. I love it!


wow. loved it.


In the beginning, this piece kind of turned me off because i don't like being compared to a piece of meat...but i kept reading it! I think i really enjoyed it....i think...in a dirty sexual passionate sort of way!! !

Give and Take

Current mood: awake
Category: Writing and Poetry



Give and Take

I want to give you everything but I don't know what you want
So.
What?
What can I give?
You want my heart?
Another part?
You and I sounds smart
But, how do we start?
What's my part?
I want to place my hand on your heart and hope to die
So.
Can I.
Can I give you my life and not sell a dream.
Will I get back a wife? Will we be the team?
The team to be
The team to beat
Because we live in dreams
But we never sleep
We're living dreams
Goals we always keep
So.
Do you?
Do you share my hope?
Do you want to build?
Just playing the field?
What is the real?
Lets talk about what we feel?
I can deal.
Keep it real
We can chill.
But I will want to cop a feel.
Build
My seed
Relax, heal
And then rebuild
Before my seed ever spills
Maybe I should just ask
Take off the mask
How do you feel?
Build?
Chill?
I try to get a feel
What is it you want to sell?
I can never tell
Can you tell
I'm lost as hell

But I'm still buyin
I'll keep tryin
Tryin to make a deal
To create somthing real
Feel something mutual
Am I feeling you at all?
How do I tell?
What can I tell?
How do I sell you and I?
Convince you to give us a try
When your eyes haven't dried
From your most recent cry

So.
What?
Can I?
Do you?
Could we?
Will you?
Would we?
Be 1, 2, or 3?






NICE!

I Try

Current mood: listless
Category: Writing and Poetry

I'm going to ride my current inspiration into the ground.


I Try

When I try to be sweet I keep it P.I.
But I cannot lie whenever we meet
When I'm in the street, I try to match eyes
And keep it all smiles while I creep
I sneak and try to keep up with the sky
Namely cloud nine, where you sleep
I hope you see me, when you wake, lying by your side
We'll both be high when we finnally meet
We'll find what we seek in the friendly skies
so we both can ride skies soft as satin sheets
We know we can't hide from the possibilities
So only truth we speak while the possible ties
You and I into you into me into we.
1-2-and-3 truly all the time for all time
You'll find yourself in every line every leak of ink
Every dream I speak with my typing every time
You cross my mind till I can't think of anything
Other than you and me while I lie
You hold my head in your lap where I love to die
But when its between thighs we live through the love we give

Same Poem Twice

Current mood: silly
Category: Writing and Poetry


Spring Break

April showers bring May flowers
Spring is here, everyone knows
Love is blooming, all over it shows
The smell of dewy roses has amazing powers

This year is not like all other years
No more me always the G-Mac
Getting all this love but never giving back
I finally get to be the one who cares

This year is serious; no more playin
I would have said anything for a girl to believe
Pretty soon it was me I had to deceive
Now I'm actually believing what I'm sayin

All I know now is to speak the truth
I hope you can handle it -

- I love you




Spring Break Redux

April showers bring May flowers
The smell of dewy roses has amazing powers

Spring is here, everyone knows
Love is blooming, all over it shows

This year is not like all other years
I finally get to be the one who cares

No more me always trying to mack
Getting all this love but never giving back

This year is serious; no more playin
Now I'm actually believing what I'm sayin
I'll say anything for you to believe
All I ever knew was to lie and deceive

All I know now is how to be truth
I hope you can handle it I love you






It was a nice little poem, even though it talks of Spring, now when everyone is facing Winter; was it nice enough, you think to do it twice? Oh yeah, your current mood was 'silly'.


I like the spacing better the in the "Redux". It seems to flow a lot smoother. Sweet.