Current mood: chipper
Category: Writing and Poetry
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Do you know what I want? You do I believe
Its less what I want but more what I need
Something to accomplish before I proceed
Something undone something more to achieve
Don't think it's a conquest. That'll never be
It's more of a challenge. There's more to me
S'far as I can remember. Far's I see
Someone's been missing from all the parties
Like something's been promised but never received
Or some special thing you never meant to leave
Virginity all over, that's what it is
Even if I've never had the thing I miss
Like something more than a kiss; sex is less
Only our minds come together for this
Virtually almost know what this thing is
Except I'm not sure I deserve such gifts
Let me know I'm not just being foolish
Otherwise we have left something unfinished
Very well may be - you, love, me? My last wish
Endless kissed first kiss forgets last kiss
It's a nice little piece, it just makes you sound a little lonely; as if you are just experiencing a breakup. It belies your notation that your mood is "chipper".
This one was just something I had written before and was just now posting. So my mood was chipper when I posted. But there is a definite longing in this poem. The experience is way after a break up just trying to find that one great kiss again. Plus I like kissing. And a lot of people don't kiss anymore.
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