Tomorrow

Current mood: tired
Category: Writing and Poetry

Tomorrow

I wish
Besides a kiss
I mean I miss
Despite your thighs
The thing I try to find
It is your eyes
The way they look at me
So unapologetically
Emotionally
What do they see
Perhaps you and me
Being
Together completely
When we return
What will we learn
Of each other
How to be lovers
Or will we end
As we begin
Truly friends
Perhaps we can
Begin true friends
And end
Hand in hand
Gland in gland
Woman and man
Or maybe it will never end
And
We will forever send
Love notes
Filled with quotes
Full of hope
That we can last
Way past
A day that never comes
Way past
The day we stopped being young
Until that day
We lay and wait
We see a woman become a girl
We experiencen the world
We see a man become a boy
Then sorrow turns to joy
After we defeat each others' sorrows
Together until today becomes tommorow





This one is very thought-provoking. I like the way you tied in the past, present, and future. And very realistic... It made me feel like it was about me.


It is for you


That's sweet. Thanks... lol :)


Perhaps I'm reading to much into it, but it reads as if there was a love lost through a misunderstanding, that was "refound" with the hope of a better one. Shows much optimism for tomorrow. I like it.


You hit it right on the head


this is definitely one of your best pieces! You should listen to John Legend everyday...


John Legend wasn't even out when I wrote this. But he was when I posted it. But I just got the new CD so I'mma listen to only it while I work. For about a week.


Very nice L.A :)


Wow! This almost didn't make the book.