Same Poem Twice

Current mood: silly
Category: Writing and Poetry


Spring Break

April showers bring May flowers
Spring is here, everyone knows
Love is blooming, all over it shows
The smell of dewy roses has amazing powers

This year is not like all other years
No more me always the G-Mac
Getting all this love but never giving back
I finally get to be the one who cares

This year is serious; no more playin
I would have said anything for a girl to believe
Pretty soon it was me I had to deceive
Now I'm actually believing what I'm sayin

All I know now is to speak the truth
I hope you can handle it -

- I love you




Spring Break Redux

April showers bring May flowers
The smell of dewy roses has amazing powers

Spring is here, everyone knows
Love is blooming, all over it shows

This year is not like all other years
I finally get to be the one who cares

No more me always trying to mack
Getting all this love but never giving back

This year is serious; no more playin
Now I'm actually believing what I'm sayin
I'll say anything for you to believe
All I ever knew was to lie and deceive

All I know now is how to be truth
I hope you can handle it I love you






It was a nice little poem, even though it talks of Spring, now when everyone is facing Winter; was it nice enough, you think to do it twice? Oh yeah, your current mood was 'silly'.


I like the spacing better the in the "Redux". It seems to flow a lot smoother. Sweet.