What I want

Current mood:Watching the dummy on TV
Category: Life

I want to write a real poem
Something not real short and not real long
Something the somewhat feels like a song
Something people feel they can follow along
And when they do, they feel like they belong
I write from wrongs to tell right from wrong
I try to right the wrong when I write the wrong
Sometimes I fear I write it wrong
At the end of the day
I just want people to get it
I want them to feel sympathetic
I don't want to have to ask them if they dig it
I don't want to come off as overly pathetic
So I try and write and post til people feel it
Then I write some more and more til I have a real hit
I just wanna have mass appeal
I just wanna know what's the deal
I just want you to know if I didn't care
I wouldn't be there
I just would not share
I just like to show how we got there
You know misery loves company
And sometimes I want to bring my whole page with me
Everywhere I go I want to take MySpace with me
I want you all to be comfortable with me
I want to drag yall into trouble with me
That way you all get to learn with me
And then you get to earn with me
A clear way to see
A new way to think
So we all can be
Perfect whole and complete






lol... it was cool until you started talking about dragging people into trouble with you. but i feel you.


I wouldn't drag anyone into trouble with me literally. I meant while they were reading my stories. They could feel like they were getting into the same things I got into in the past.


You have a surreal depth abouth you. It is worhty of acknowledgement and appreciation. Especially because you are so willing to share all the intricacies of what's happening inside you... Don't worry about mass apeal. Those who appeal to the masses fall prey to the masses. Who you are is enough...Be you in all your faults and complexities. Be you and all u are is ENOUGH!!!


Thank you! I know to most people, mass appeal would seem to imply that I would change to fit in with everyone. On the contrary, I notice the most respected people are the people who are never afraid to be themselves. And that is what I strive for.


Good times in the LLC!!! You just earned yourself a drink in Vegas.