Love (1994)

Current mood: listless
Category: Writing and Poetry

This is from the notebook. I'm inputing all that on the computer now. It's full of older poems and unfinished stuff as well as the new poems I wrote. The last poem I wrote was an unfinished one I was able to finish as I typed it into the computer. Anyhow, all that is to say I have more coming. So old, old stuff. Some brand new and some in between.

AND!!!

Excerpts from my non-fiction. "The Super Senior's Guide to College Living"

Love

No girl has ever touched G-Mac
No girl so far outside the sac

No girl is there in Los Angeles
No girl has me dream of her angel's kiss

No girl has held me without a touch
No girl is in my thoughts ever so much

No girl who never held my hand
No girl moves me to be a true man

No girl has made marriage not far away
No girl has made that tomorrow like yesterday

One girl has really touched my life
One girl even if she can't be mine
One girl is always on my mind
One girl I'll still ask to be my wife

Wow. It's funny how I wrote that line about marriage not being far away 12 years ago. I guess its all relative. I still believe.






i really enjoyed this piece...the only thing i didn't understand was the first two lines. What does "G-Mac" mean? It was too clever to begin with those two lines. Just my opinion...but who am I;-)


It was 1994. I had a million and one nick names for myself. And I don't change my poems. I may write another similar one. That's just how I roll.


I enjoyed the piece; it reflects a sensitive nature, however "negetive". I suppose that's an indication of that "mood" you were in at the time.


Keep reading. I feel like the newer stuff is much much better than the old. I really believed I would marry the girl I wrote this for. I think that feeling only happened one other time. Looking back now...


i have felt this way before and i never want to be married and i'm only 18...


Interesting poem. Not bad.
Janice


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