Poetry for her

Current mood:Reminiscent
Category: Writing and Poetry

I just realiazed I have been on MySpace for Two years. That has nothing to do with what I'm about to write except for the way I found that out. I was looking to see if I have posted any of these poems online and I haven't.

I just want to write that I wrote this about someone I knew (in a way I guess I still know her). Fact is she is one my MySpace friends. So I was hesitant to share these but...My slogan is - Me Vale Verga. I may as well act like it sometimes. (If you don't speak spanish I have a blog entitled Me Vale Verga that will explain all. Its dated January 2, 2006 if you want to read it)

Anyhow, I saw this girl and had to have her. As you know from reading, I never achieved the relationship I sought. Time passed, we moved, and moved on. Life goes on. And the poetry must be shared. All this is to say that the situation here is rare. I don't believe in paying any attention at all to anyone's girlfriend. I'm a little older and Me Vale Verga. (I'm trying to create a cliche) But once in a blue moon, I see a girl...


Congratulations

There's a dilemma I face
To hate or congratulate
What a decision to make
To finally decide my fate
But wait
Why should I have to hate
To win my mate
But then
If it's a game I'm in
I'm definitely in
To win
And that puts another twist
Into this
Predicament
So that's all
My whole problem yall
How do I call
And not stall
My own progress
That is, prove I'm the best
So that's the test
To get in
I hate him
But then
If he's hatin
It's all the same
On every layer
And I can't hate the player
So I hate the game
To make it plain
I'mma be true
I do
Love you
Do you, too?


Congratualtions 2

Might as well give up
With my luck
I'll always be stuck
Like chuck
In a rut
Forced to live without
Hurt so deep within
With a boat load of
So called friends
When will it end
Will I ever bend
And pretend
To know
The other beau
Then interfere
Lie
In wait
Filled with hate
Like some clown
Mess around
Automatic first down
Manhandlin' the receivers
That would mean I believed her
Is she even faithful
Why am I so hateful
Cuz I know
Even if she was
I wouldn't
Couldn't
Know I shouldn't
Cuz I meant
Not a trick
True fulfillment
Real relationships


(Addendum)

I'll never say no
So
How can you
If I come from the heart
Why
Isn't it true
Oh
The things you
Do
When I see you
In blue
My favorite color
My favorite girl
But one won't come through
But can I blame you
If I'm scared to make a move
Back to the same ol' question
Is there a difference
They don't call Pass Interference
If I make the interception


?

I'mma be straight
Cuz I can't wait
It'll be too late
And I ain't gone be hopin
For his heart to be broken
For you to have spoken
The words I hear echoin
In my ear
Vibrating
All over
Tell him you love another
You found a better lover
The better brother
I know you may have loved him
But it wasn't love you were in
Some type of infatuation
A quick distraction
While I made the interception
Cuz of my smooth actions
So what's your reaction
Now that you're my dove
You realize you weren't in love
Love is something more
You don't care you adore
And I don't care if I don't score
You don't need a picture
To be sure
You remember
What your heart beats for
And I'll always be sure
Your love is pure
Cuz when you're in love
There is no other
Like no one is above
You sister, father, brother
Or mother
No one can replace your true lover

Please, my friends. I need feedback on these. They may not make the book.






it's interesting that you said these wouldnt make that book b/c as i was reading them i was thinking to myself how i want to print them out so that if am ever placed back in that situation i could look to your words for comfort. i must say that these have touched me the most, even as i type now i still feel my heartbeat beating against my chest in a much too rapid pace to say i was only reading. once again i dont know how you do it, but dont stop.


thank you in countless ways!!!


much luv


beautiful, i really like it.


Absolutely, wonderful.
Thanks for sharing.
Renee


I wish she thought so.


All of these are nice but the last entry titled "?" is righteous!!! The real question is why aren't more men (males) privy to this type of manning up??? O-kaaay!