The Break-Up

Everyone was so excited to see me settling down. Some weren't. But, to speak without really speaking on what happened these last three months without giving too many details, here is my newest poem entitled -



THE BREAK-UP
So many rhymes
So many lines
And I gave them all away
To you
Good riddance
Too many times
Too much of my life
You took it all away
For you
To leave hidden
A little more wine
And you're a little more fine
So I have to drink
For me
To want to hit it
A little too much wine
And you're so much less fine
So please don't drink
So you
Can still get it
What if I missed my life
What if I missed my wife
Just by being polite
Sometime doing what's nice
Isn't doing what's right
So tonight
Let's fight
With all our might
Against polite
Against fright
Miller light
And vodka on ice
Forget nice
This is life
Wrong is never right


So I left


Let me add - This is fiction. I was inspired by these last three months. I am changed for the better and I have no regrets. Everything I write (even a poem directly to a person) is an absolute truth. Truth is in your perspective and what YOU get out of my writing. I know my friends and readers get many different things. So, while I cannot hold back my writing from anyone, I do have to be clear that this poem is very dramatic. My relationship and the end of it was dramatic and that is all. I love all my friends (including exes who still wish to speak to me) for they make me who I am.

Thank you for reading. Never bitter. Never hateful. Just exhaling.


Brother you are a mess. You did not have to post the break up on the blog. That may hurt old girls feelings. The poem was tight though. It broke it all down for eall to understand
Love

Sis

That was tight as hell. Way to free yourself my brotha.

Of Course I had to respond. Please remember a poem is just a poem at times. A writer has to come up with words that rhyme and lines that come together to make a good poem. This can cause a situation to not be described completely. We had our good times and agreed we would not change knowing each other for anything. Also it was a mutual decision to break up Jas did not leave. After reading the poem last night I had to call and I’m glad we had the chance to talk and have decided to be friends. Jason keep writing your great at it. Oh and I do love Merlot and you do love your vodka mixed with water you were right about that we just had a little too much at times. I have much love for you and you have taught me more than any man has. Even though I know it was time to end the relationship you still are a great friend.

Talk to you later
Nesa